Sunday Night at the Orchid Room (Nov. 18, 2007)
Ah, the Orchid Room…
I come here to listen
to youth and vigor spilling out
from inner voices that speak of vinegar and honey,
of sulfuric acid and mercury.
Sweet Voodoo Child tests the waters
giving glimpses of the power of her words
yet to come.
She is what gives us hope for the future,
as delicate as the dew-shimmering webbing
of a dragonfly’s wings,
as strong as the chainmail of the black knight,
a soul with a Kevlar vest made to fit,
The inner visual acuity of a Lennon not dead,
a Leary not burned out on LSD.
I salivate at the mere thought of new words,
of wisdom so ancient
it free falls from his soul
…Older Than Aztecs…
Look into his eyes, it’s there to see.
Listen to his voice, it’s easy to hear,
A prophet, he’d scoff at what I say,
but it’s as real as this dream we live.
Only a man who’s seen beyond time
Could play the music so well
And wear that gray fedora with such grace and style.
I come here to listen to
Sweet Child of Mine,
who brings out the mother in me
and my she-claws spring to defend.
But she’s quite grown up, speaking of love,
her voice grown strong
the way Women’s voices do
when they leave prince charming’s behind
sitting in a mud puddle of pig shit, his mouth hanging open
as she saunters away.
Make no mistake,
None of these people need my
clipped and broken talons in their lives.
They don’t often know it’s me there at the corner table.
I simply listen to the timbre of their souls
carried on the blue smoke of the Orchid Room
and love them for the fact
they don’t simply live, they feel in ways I recognize,
in ways I respect,
they stand at this mike to sing their songs for us all.
Ah, the Orchid Room…
I order my drink here:
A Brass Monkey
That’s ½ oz rum, ½ oz vodka, 4 oz orange juice in a high ball,
But the bartender knows me here, knows my drink.
He fixes it a bit stronger and longer and forgoes the optional Galliano
on nights when I come in
nodding my head in his direction.
Pardon my bare feet;
This is the place I kick off my shoes
And let my hair fall down.
I sing my song at the mike
for the others who come here to listen.
Pardon my low cut crimson dress;
This is the place I show myself for who I am, it’s true.
There are no lies here for me.
It’s far too easy for the others
to feel insincerity in my words if they aren’t stripped bare.
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gingatao! said,
November 22, 2007 at 10:20 am
This is a great piece of writing, full of character and confidence. One gets such a strong sense of the narrator and her vision of the world. Absolutely wonderful in its directness and control. Superb.
gingatao! said,
November 22, 2007 at 10:24 am
(oh and you were right. It looks better centred so I have edited it in the Orchid Room, thanks, I should have listened to you in the first place, sorry. You can delete this comment if you like)
mimiamos said,
November 23, 2007 at 4:43 pm
I posted this on WritersCafe as “The Coffee House Blue Room”. The Angelheaded Hipster gave it a thumbs up. Definitely, when Paul says “Superb”, when the Hipster says “Wow”, you want to frame it and hang it on the wall! So I’m adding the Hipster’s comment there to the space here since this is now my wall:
“Wow…Just wow….how this slipped past my radar is beyond me…I see myself in those words…I know so many people that hang out there in that Blue Room of yours…
This is just mind blowingly creative, visual….I feel like I could read this at least once a day, and never tire of it….”
Soulless said,
November 24, 2007 at 1:44 pm
A clear portrayal of your love for the place — its atmosphere, its people, its promise of sanctuary to any weary passerby with hands in his pockets filled with words (instead of change). The fifth stanza’s my favorite part.
Cheers.