Warmth in Winter

February 10, 2008 at 2:52 am (Poetry) (, , )

Crocus in Snow

Lay a blanket down and settle against the hill

To take in the blueness of the sky

Open a bottle of wine to celebrate

The fresh scent of pine on the air

Cool and soothing against the cheek

Like the memory of a kiss.

The whisper of a pleasant breeze in the trees is interrupted…

In the distance that lonely freight train from nowhere

passes slowly on its way to anywhere else.

Mournfully calling out, it exists inside a Johnny Cash song,

And knows full well you won’t follow along this time.

Anywhere else is a dream of swirling snow

Where overstuffed coats are pulled tight against near-frozen bodies.

Nowhere is a place you’ve been with tears in your eyes

Tears you shouldn’t be willing to shed

When they turn to droplets of cruel ice on tender skin.

You should smile at the warmth instead

Put your faith in the here and now

Throw rocks in the stream

Touch the warm golden light from the evening sun

And dance with the pleasure of life.

How lush life can be,

How calm it is

Where the green grass beckons

And flowers bloom against the odds

in mid-winter.



  1. gingatao! said,

    Goegeously beautiful. Starts with a warmth and bliss gets cold and lonely but the contrast only serves to make the ending more divine, how lush life can be, how calm it is, your poem is itself one of beauties in which it rejoices,

  2. Narnie said,

    such contentment… how wonderful. This comes alive with colour and movement, but most importantly emotions of dancing barefoot in the grass. Perfect. I love it Mimi.

  3. Soulless said,

    I loved the lines about “anywhere else” and “nowhere” — lines which render depth of meaning to “that lonely freight train from nowhere passes slowly on its way to anywhere else”. Makes me want to sing. 😉 Thank you.

  4. Paul said,

    hellooooo, Mimi. I miss you and your beautiful writing. Hope everything is going well, smoothly like the night sky and sparkley too.

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